A Max Planck Institute study reveals how “complex stories” boost the linguistic complexity of preschoolers’ speech


Introduction: Not All Picture Books Are Created Equal

Everyone knows that reading to children is beneficial. Decades of research have consistently shown that shared reading contributes to preschoolers’ vocabulary, comprehension, and literacy development. So one question remains — does the choice of book matter?

Most existing studies focused on whether parents read to their children at all, or on reading style (e.g., dialogic reading vs. simple read-aloud). But whether the characteristics of the book itself — whether the story is simple or complex, whether it requires inferring characters’ mental states — affects children’s language development had barely been explored.

There was one clue. Observational studies had found that when parents engaged in talk that goes beyond the “here and now” during reading — guessing characters’ feelings, explaining why they acted a certain way, a kind of exchange known as abstract talk — their children’s language development was stronger. The problem was that these findings were purely correlational.

So the question became: If the story itself is complex, does the adult’s conversation naturally become more complex, and does the child’s language follow? A team from the University of Manchester and the Max Planck Institute for Psycholinguistics answered this question with an experiment.


The Core Research Question

The research team asked:

“When preschoolers are repeatedly exposed to simple versus complex stories, do differences emerge in their language production during reading and in their vocabulary and narrative skills?”

Here, “complex stories” doesn’t mean difficult vocabulary or convoluted sentences. It refers to stories where a character’s false belief is central to the plot. For example, a goose who thinks she’s alone in the woods, unaware that a fox, a wolf, and a bear are following her. It’s the kind of story that makes a child think, “Why isn’t the goose scared?”


How They Did It

Participants

Thirty-four children (ages 3;07 to 4;11) were recruited from two schools in socioeconomically disadvantaged areas of Greater Manchester, UK. All were monolingual English speakers with a mean receptive vocabulary standard score of 105.06 (SD = 11.12).

Simple Stories vs. Complex Stories

Children were randomly assigned to one of two conditions. Five picture books were used in each condition.

  • Simple condition: Stories with no false belief. Scripted extratextual talk consisted of concrete descriptions (“Look at the ladybird crawling along”) and low-level inferences (“How do you think snake feels?”)
  • Complex condition: Stories where a character’s false belief was central to the plot. Scripted talk included predictions and explanations

What did this look like in practice? In the complex condition, the scripts included prompts like:

“Does Suzy Goose think she is alone?” “Why is the fox following her?” “She thinks she’s by herself because the other animals are so quiet.”

In the simple condition:

“Can you see the water coming out of his trunk?” “What’s that?” “Look, they’re swinging on jungle vines.”

The key difference is clear. The complex condition included questions that made children think about “why?” and “how?”, while the simple condition stayed at the level of “what?” and “where?”

The 6-Week Intervention

  • Twice weekly, in small groups of 3–4 children, read aloud by an experimenter
  • Each session lasted 10–15 minutes, covering 2–3 books
  • Each book was read 5 times total (26 reading sessions over 6 weeks)
  • Scripts were changed every two readings to maintain naturalness
  • The experimenter adhered to scripts and always provided the model answer regardless of children’s responses

What Was Measured

  1. Language production during reading (audio analysis of final sessions in weeks 5–6)

    • Mean length of utterance (MLU)
    • Number of subordinate clauses (causal, conditional, temporal)
    • Number of mental verbs (“think,” “believe”) and communication verbs (“say,” “tell”)
  2. Pre- and post-intervention standardized tests

    • Receptive vocabulary: BPVS-II (British Picture Vocabulary Scale)
    • Narrative ability: Bus Story test (sentence length and complexity in story retelling)

Results: Complex Stories, Complex Speech

Language Production During Reading — Dramatic Differences

MeasureSimple ConditionComplex ConditionStatistical Significance
Subordinate clauses0.33 (SD 0.69)5.73 (SD 4.11)z = 4.82, p < .001
Mental & communication verbs2.28 (SD 2.37)5.73 (SD 3.58)z = 3.36, p < .001
Mean length of utterance3.44 (SD 0.89)4.75 (SD 1.26)t = 2.25, p = .025

The numbers speak for themselves. Children who heard complex stories used subordinate clauses over 17 times more often, used mental verbs (“think,” “believe”) 2.5 times more, and produced sentences 38% longer. The average number of causal subordinate clauses (“because…”) in the simple condition was 0.28 — in the complex condition, it was 4.00. Conditional clauses (“if…”) never appeared once in the simple condition.

Standardized Tests — No Differences

MeasureSimple (Post)Complex (Post)Significance
Receptive vocabulary (BPVS raw)49.1849.82p = .952
Narrative length score7.878.78p = .442
Narrative complexity score2.002.47p = .296

After the 6-week intervention, standardized vocabulary and narrative retelling tests showed no significant differences between the two conditions.


Why Did Speech Change but Test Scores Didn’t?

This is the most intriguing part of the study. Children’s speech during reading was dramatically different, yet formal test scores didn’t budge. The research team offered four possible explanations.

First, six weeks is short. Children had begun practicing complex language, but not long enough for it to become internalized and transfer to other contexts. The team acknowledged that “longer interventions may be needed to yield larger effects.”

Second, the measurement tools were too broad. The BPVS measures general receptive vocabulary, and the Bus Story assesses narrative retelling ability. These instruments are too coarse to capture the specific kinds of complex language (subordinate clauses, mental verbs) that children were intensively practicing. The team suggested that “more targeted measures, such as a narrative retell that includes selected target vocabulary from the intervention sessions,” would be needed.

Third, the rigidity of the scripts. The experimenter faithfully followed scripts but did not provide tailored feedback to children’s responses. When a child answered “because the fox is following,” there was no responsive expansion like “Yes, the fox is following because he’s hungry!” According to Vygotsky’s scaffolding theory, responsive support calibrated to a child’s current level maximizes learning effects. This element was missing.

Fourth, sample size. Thirty-four children may not be enough to detect subtle differences between two conditions.


Does This Mean Reading Complex Stories Is Pointless?

Not at all. The real value of this study lies in the finding that complex stories create opportunities to practice complex language.

Whether a child has ever attempted structures like “because…,” “I think that…,” or “if…” matters. These constructions are essential tools for engaging in classroom discussions, explaining one’s thinking, and reasoning logically in primary school. The research team states:

“Having the opportunity to practice using the kinds of language observed in this study is likely to support children’s preparedness for formal primary school education.”

Test scores haven’t moved yet, but children have already started speaking differently. That’s the first signal of change.


Practical Implications

When Choosing a Book, Consider the Complexity of the Plot

The intuition that “easy books are better for children” may be wrong. Stories where characters are mistaken about something, have hidden intentions, or face unexpected twists — stories that make a child ask “why?” — can push their language to the next level.

Ask “Why?” and “How?”

During reading, instead of “What is that?”, try asking “Why did she do that?”, “What do you think will happen?”, “How does this character feel?” These questions give children opportunities to practice sentence structures involving causation, conditions, and mental states.

Read the Same Book Multiple Times

In this study, each book was read 5 times. Repetition isn’t boredom — it’s deepening. On the first reading, children are busy following the plot. On repeated readings, they have the space to think more deeply about “why?” and speak more complexly.


Limitations

  • Small sample size. With 34 children (17 per condition), the study may have been underpowered to detect small effects.
  • Group-level analysis. Language production during reading was analyzed at the small-group level (3–4 children), not the individual level. It’s possible that certain children dominated the conversations.
  • Six weeks is short. More time may be needed for complex language practice to translate into standardized test score gains.
  • Scripted approach. The experimenter did not provide tailored feedback to children’s responses, making the interaction different from natural parent-child conversation.
  • Limited demographic scope. Only children from socioeconomically disadvantaged areas in the UK were studied. Whether the same effects hold for children from other backgrounds requires further research.

Closing Thoughts

The message of this study is this:

The story you choose determines the kind of language your child gets to practice. And that practice is the first step toward understanding and expressing a complex world in complex language.

“Why is the fox following the goose?” — this single question gives a child the opportunity to produce a causal clause: “Because he’s hungry.” “What if the goose had looked behind her?” — this question creates space for a child to experiment with conditional grammar. Not an expensive curriculum, but one well-chosen picture book is enough.


Source: Muhinyi, A., Stewart, A. J., & Rowland, C. F. (2025). Encouraging use of complex language in preschoolers: A classroom-based storybook intervention study. Language Learning and Development, 21(4), 399–417. https://doi.org/10.1080/15475441.2024.2443447